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Monday, November 5, 2018

WALT: We are learning to write scary stories.

Bloody Mary

Once upon a time, not so long ago, it was the twins birthday . But not just any twins, they were princesses and they had a little sister. She was the cutest girl you could ever imagine. But … the twins hated her. So they tricked her. this is what the twins said “Sis you should go in the bathroom and play a game with. Umm Mary! All you have to do is say Bloody Mary 3 times in the mirror. Then you can have a friend.” The poor little sister slowly walked into the bathroom… but the twins said “she will be fine Bloody Mary is fake.” all of a sudden they heard a scream. “AHHHH!” The twins rushed into the bathroom but there was nothing to be seen except the cute little girl lying in the bath full of red Fanta. 

By Charlize

What did you dress up as for Halloween?

2 comments:

  1. Fantastic. I dressed up as a panda human. It was interesting. I hope you make more intrsesting storys

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    1. thank you very much and every friday we have free writing friday so maybe i can asked if can post it on my blog when i am finished

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